1. Theme : Entertaiment
2. Headline : NATALIE PORTMAN BROUGHT HOME OSCAR TROPHY
3. Points : - 1st Paragraph
Natalie Portman’s victory on Oscar 2011
- 2nd Paragraph
Natalie Portman’s victory speech
- 3rd Paragraph
Natalie Portman’s appreciation to all of nominations of The Best Female Leading Role Category.
- 4th Paragraph
The other winner of Oscar 2011
4 comments:
I think the draft is okay, I mean it's clear enough so the readers could predict how the article will be :)
And I love the news :) It's nice
(Novi)
I think the draft is already very good and I really like the news :)
by ida
I think the draft is very good and the news is interesting.
by Rizka Yusrina
To my dearest novi, ida, and rizka...
More than my thousand thanks to all of you guys. :)
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